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IntroductionUnit: Linking and SynthesisGCSE

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🔎 The Examiner's Complaint Nobody Reads

AQA examiners write it every year: “candidates treat each paragraph as a separate island.” They find a technique, explain it, move on. The mark stays at Level 3 — technically competent, structurally blind.

A pattern that runs across the whole extract is worth more than five separate observations. One sentence that says “this builds from X to Y across the extract” can do more for your mark than three more technique-spotting paragraphs.

Practice questions for Cross-Paragraph Pattern-Finding

Which of these best describes a cross-paragraph pattern?

  • A. A technique that develops across the whole text, not just one paragraph
  • B. A quotation from the final paragraph of the extract
  • C. The main character's feelings in the opening
  • D. One powerful technique used in a single sentence
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What is the correct order for finding a cross-paragraph pattern?

  • A. Quote, explain, conclude
  • B. Summarise the plot, then find techniques
  • C. Identify the technique, track its development, name the arc
  • D. Find the best quotation in each paragraph separately
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Quick recall flashcards

What are the three moves for finding and naming a cross-paragraph pattern?
<strong>Move 1 &mdash; Identify:</strong> spot the technique or idea in its first appearance (usually opening or second paragraph)<br><br><strong>Move 2 &mdash; Track:</strong> does it recur? Does the language intensify, diminish, or twist at each reappearance?<br><br><strong>Move 3 &mdash; Name the arc:</strong> what has changed from first appearance to last? That change is the pattern &mdash; state it as a claim: <em>&ldquo;The writer builds / shifts / dismantles X across the extract.&rdquo;</em><br><br><em>Tip: the arc is your opening sentence. Individual paragraphs become the evidence for it &mdash; not the thing you list first.</em>
What does <strong>I-T-A</strong> stand for when finding a cross-paragraph pattern?
<strong>I &mdash; Identify:</strong> spot the technique or idea in its first appearance<br><strong>T &mdash; Track:</strong> follow it through the text &mdash; does it grow, shrink, or shift?<br><strong>A &mdash; Arc:</strong> name what has changed &mdash; that is the pattern<br><br><em>Memory hook:</em> <strong>ITA</strong> &mdash; like an itch you can&rsquo;t ignore. Find it (Identify), scratch it across the text (Track), and describe what it left behind (Arc).<br><br><em>In a sentence:</em> &ldquo;The writer [builds/shifts/dismantles] [technique/idea] across the extract, [arc in one clause].&rdquo; That opener, backed by specific language from two or three points in the text, is an L4 pattern-finding sentence.

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