⚠️ The L1 Cap: Paraphrase Will Not Earn AO1 Marks

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Common MisconceptionsUnit: Quote HandlingGCSE

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⚠️ The L1 Cap: Paraphrase Will Not Earn AO1 Marks

The misconception: if the paraphrase accurately captures what the writer meant, it counts as textual evidence. Using inverted commas around a summary is the same as using a quote.

Why it caps your grade: AO1 requires the writer’s actual words. A paraphrase is evidence that you understood the passage — which is worth Level 1 — but it is not evidence that you can read language analytically. The marks for AO2 language analysis depend on the writer’s specific word choices being present. You cannot analyse “the sea was rough” (your words) the same way you can analyse “blind, blundering fists” (the writer’s words).

The fix: before writing any analytical sentence, locate the writer’s exact words in the passage and embed them. If you cannot find words in the passage that match what you want to say, choose a different analytical point — one that is actually grounded in specific language.

When deliberate paraphrase is acceptable: paraphrase without inverted commas is acceptable for introducing context or situating a quotation. “When the narrator describes arriving at the city,” followed by the actual embedded quote, is fine — the paraphrase is context, not evidence.

Practice questions for Avoiding Paraphrase-as-Quote

What is the key difference between a paraphrase and a quotation?

  • A. A quotation uses the writer's actual words; a paraphrase uses the student's own words
  • B. A quotation must be longer than a paraphrase
  • C. A paraphrase needs inverted commas but a quotation does not
  • D. A quotation and a paraphrase are both valid forms of textual evidence
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The original text reads: 'He moved across the ice with the patient tenacity of something that had long since stopped expecting the ground to cooperate.' A student writes: the writer says 'the old man struggled to walk on the ice'. Is this a genuine quotation?

  • A. Yes — the student has put the words in inverted commas
  • B. No — the words in inverted commas are the student's own summary, not the writer's actual words
  • C. Yes — the student has accurately summarised what the writer said
  • D. No — the student should have used a longer quotation
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Quick recall flashcards

What is the difference between a quotation and a paraphrase?
<strong>Quotation:</strong> the writer&rsquo;s actual words, reproduced exactly, inside inverted commas.<br><br><strong>Paraphrase:</strong> the student&rsquo;s own summary of what the writer said, often placed in inverted commas as if it were a quote &mdash; but it is not.<br><br><strong>Why this matters:</strong> AO1 requires textual reference &mdash; the writer&rsquo;s own words. A paraphrase is evidence that you understood the passage (Level 1) but not evidence that you can analyse language. AO2 marks depend on the specific words the writer chose being present on the page.<br><br><em>Tell-tale sign:</em> if removing the inverted commas makes no difference to your sentence, it is probably paraphrase.
Why does paraphrase-as-quote cap a response at Level 1?
<strong>AO1</strong> rewards textual reference that supports interpretation. Paraphrase supplies the student&rsquo;s own words, not the writer&rsquo;s &mdash; so it cannot earn AO1.<br><br><strong>AO2</strong> rewards language analysis tied to specific word choices. If the words you are &lsquo;quoting&rsquo; were written by the student, there is no technique or connotation to analyse &mdash; the language is generic.<br><br><em>Example:</em> the student &lsquo;quotes&rsquo; that &lsquo;the sea was rough&rsquo;. These are ordinary words with no unusual connotation. But the writer actually wrote &lsquo;blind, blundering fists&rsquo; &mdash; those words reward analysis of metaphor, connotation, and unexpected register.

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