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⚠️ The Two Extended Metaphor Traps

Trap 1: Listing Instances Without Tracing the Arc

Writing “the writer uses fire imagery in paragraphs one, two, and three” is listing, not analysis. The mark scheme rewards the explanation of how the metaphor changes as it is extended. Ask: does the comparison intensify, complicate, reverse, or narrow? What does the writer gain by sustaining it rather than using it once?

Trap 2: Treating Every Use as Identical

Each appearance of the metaphor in the passage is doing slightly different work. “Spark” is different from “ignited” is different from “ash” — they draw on different aspects of the same vehicle, and those differences are where the analysis lives. If you treat all three as simply “fire imagery = danger”, you are flattening the architecture the writer built.

Practice questions for Extended Metaphor Across Passage

Which of the following best describes an extended metaphor?

A. A comparison sustained and developed across multiple sentences or the whole passage, with each use adding to the original comparison.
B. A metaphor that is very long and uses unusual vocabulary.
C. A metaphor that appears once but is very powerful and memorable.
D. When a writer uses two different metaphors about the same subject.

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A student writes: 'The writer uses fire imagery three times -- spark, ignited, and ash. This creates a sense of danger.' What is limiting about this response?

A. The student has spotted too many instances -- one would be enough.
B. The student lists the instances and attaches a single vague effect, but does not explain how the metaphor builds or what changes between its uses.
C. The student should not use bullet points to list instances.
D. The student has identified the wrong technique -- this is personification, not an extended metaphor.

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What does E -- D -- A stand for when analysing an extended metaphor?

E -- Establish: what does the first use of the metaphor claim? What is the writer comparing the subject to at the start? D -- Develop: how does the metaphor grow, deepen, or change in the middle of the passage? A -- Achieve: what does the writer gain by sustaining it to the close? Does it complete, intensify, or reverse? Memory hook: E-D-A -- think of it as the shape of the analysis: you are describing the arc the writer designed, from the first use to the last. A Level 4 response on an extended metaphor traces all three stages, not just names the pattern.

What is an extended metaphor and how does it differ from a single metaphor?

A single metaphor makes a comparison once: 'the crowd was a tide'. It illuminates a moment. An extended metaphor sustains and develops that comparison across multiple sentences or the whole passage. Each new use adds to the comparison: 'the crowd surged', 'bodies flooded the street', 'the noise swelled'. By the close, the comparison has accumulated weight and possibly changed direction. What AQA rewards: not spotting the metaphor but tracing how it builds -- what it establishes, how it is complicated, and what the writer achieves by sustaining it to the end.

⚖️ L2 vs L4: Tracing an Extended Metaphor

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⚠️ The Two Extended Metaphor Traps

Trap 1: Listing Instances Without Tracing the Arc

Trap 2: Treating Every Use as Identical

Practice questions for Extended Metaphor Across Passage

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⚠️ The Two Extended Metaphor Traps